This is an advert made by a past media student, looking at it I can straight away see some things I would do differently. The images are quite low quality so I'd ensure those were higher, the text is also hard to read due to how small it is and the colour of the background/text makes it even harder to read.
Another thing that I would change it the layout of the advert, the text seems to be all over the place and doesn't flow very well, I do however like the idea of the image, with the microphone being left on the floor but I feel like this is an advert aimed at people who are already fans of the band as if it was aiming at new fans it would show images of the band so they can see.
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